Monday, February 15, 2010

gloomy

Each dark hour
beached like the Nautilus
in 20,000 Leagues
on a dangerous island.
It will not go away
never moving
it's cloud hovering
more eclipse than overcast.
Bringing me to weep
and stair at the barometer again.

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

You have to express more your opinion to attract more readers, because just a video or plain text without any personal approach is not that valuable. But it is just form my point of view

ADDollhouse said...

it's alright, this blog, well, I almost don't EXPECT readers. It is more of just a journal to put my poetry in.

Anonymous said...

Super-Duper site! I am loving it!! Will come back again - taking you feeds also, Thanks.

© Kipluck aka: BethAnn Mayberry All work is the exclusive property of the blog author, Kipluck, under her legal name unless otherwise noted. If you want to use it for something, chances are I will say yes if you ASK. If you don't ask, I will sue your pants off. For the record, my best friend StephAnn has the right to play with any and all of my poetry she wants. We are partners in crime.